Suggestions....
Click on :Flash Portal:
Scroll Down To "LEARN FLASH"
Select "Learn Flash"
Watch tutorials.
Now, the animation that was drawn on the very blurry graph paper was quite good. Nice flow...blurry as all hell.... beginning and end.
If you are unhappy about the length, fix it or don't say anything.
Its always good to have a positive attitude about your work, because its showcasing your "AMAZING UBER POWERS" aka you.
Try posting a polished piece next time, I can guarantee you'll receive much better praise and allure.
Final Note: This is NEWGROUNDS, not f**king YouTube. He who has the most videos on the web is not always the winner, especially if said videos look like this.